looks REALLY cute. well done. ^____^ yoo did really well seeming as youve not drawn in so long.

Id recogmend you post it over on the sweatdrop forum. you can get really good crit over there.

XD do you like the new submision page? it looks a lot like the one over on sheezy art now .. XD;;;

umm crit crit crit ....

theres a few problems with the line art on the hair. but as you said that your hand was wobberly - that might be why. so purhaps me pointing it out is fairly picky? but anyhow I really like the detail on the hair. lovely stuff. you just need to work on getting the curves right. remember hair generally has a ball on the head where all the hair comes from. umm but the ball of hair is located on different peoples heads at different points. does that make any sence? ... I hope so. um so yeah ... remember that all the hair should come from this point. (more or less - inless the fring is seperated from this ball of hair) do I make sence? I dont think I do ...

anyhow the expersion is lovely! but I think that the placement of face maybe slightly off. his chin is very pointy XD ..... umm and the mouth seems to be too high up in relation to the chin? .... I think that the sides of the face need slightly more shape rather than just, almost, going straight down into a chin .... it almost looks like theres no jaw ... or just a very pointed one.

I think maybe more of the ear should be seen ... because the shape of the ear - if it was visable .. more of it would be seen. (if not then he has very little ears)

thats a good point ..... in loveless they have car ears AND normal human ears? ....... wow ...... o_______O

anyway as far as the body goes - you did well. the head might be a fraction too big tho. good work on the hand too - just watch those wobberly lines ... but again ... that could be dude to you not feeling too good.

when my hand wobbles ... I tend to thicken the line ... so its correct ..... but then I end up with very thick line art awh well.

are they those stickers on the corners that we always used to stick on the cartoon kids? XD awesome!

^___________^ this is really good!

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hehehehe u fool
i didnt no how 2 write happy fathers day
i will b puttin one on myself even though my dads not here 2 enjoy it with us still dont mean i cant celebrate him
reli gud pic though
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thnx! lol i just guessed it ^_^ the no after happy is wrong tho . . .
i think its gd to put one up, he;s still your father so yeh u can still celebrate him! ^_^
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lol thnx! i'll take it all into account. . . and yes they are the stickers (your very observant lmao).

i couldnt believe they had 2 lots of ears aswell . . they must have really good hearing.

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lmao I used to use those stickers all the time

imagin having 4 ears ....... o_______o

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ur welcome
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh i cant stop sneezin
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SUUUPER HEARING!! <^((=^_^)^> LOL

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hear through lead walls.

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It's very cute, Darkrogue!

If you want some crit, I'd say try positioning the picture more in the centre when you're getting ready to submit it, all that white space makes the eye wander.

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